Set II, 17

Directions: Copy the paragraph below, correcting any errors in the use of subject words, object words, and words that show ownership.

The Rolling Stones gave they're most successful concert of the year at our Civic Center. There lead singer, Mick Jagger, really entertained they audience. Hi's pink satin shirt and green silk pants and silver knee boots impressed my friends and I. Mick Jagger hair was cut in layers and moved wildly when him and his band danced about the stage. You would have held you breath while he danced nonstop throughout the concert just as I held mines. The other members of the audience were ecstatic and left the building with smiles on their faces that were just as happy as those which we ourself had on our's.